Update Two Hundred and Sixty-Three: 27 December 2018

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Another really weak VN. While the art is pretty nice and there’s a TON of cute, cuddly CGs, this VN is really mediocre. Tons of cliches and genre conventions I hate - the boys are all jealous and pushy, the main character is clumsy and useless. The language is okay, if only because of the efforts of, in fact, the person who made the giveaway. The team got criticism about how weak the original translation was, so they hired steam user Chudah on to fix up the writing. Good on them! Unfortunately, it didn’t help much.

Next up: Onto the other VN I won on SG!

See you soon!