The Dreamatorium of Dr. Magnus 2
Not recommended
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The Dreamatorium of Dr. Magnus 2
4 hours playtime
15 of 15 achievements
Hi there. Well this game is pretty basic, way too simple, the characters are as engaging as a pebble on the road, the only challenge here is to find all the “eyes of horus”.
You play as Iris Birdwood a paranormal detective, who as such, can access anybody’s house and any supersecret project they had been working on.
The writing and design feel amateurish at best, they do try to bring new features but that isn’t enough to make the product shine. Multitool is a good but unexplored idea, there are just a few hidden objects scenes that are at least mechanically different from one another. The voice acting is hideous, especially for the main character, which is a shame.
If you are looking for a good HOG with decent plot and development, this is not it. If you are looking for a simple HOG to pass time it could be worth trying.
happy Gaming
PS: Any grammatical or redaction tips for my reviews are always welcome :)
Since you asked…anybodys should be anybody’s. And I still don’t quite understand that sentence. The “who saying that” is awkward. Maybe, “You play as Iris Birdwood a paranormal detective, who as such, can access anybody’s house and any supersecret project they have been working on.”
The comma in “The writing and design feel amateurish at best, they do try to bring new features […]” needs to be a semi-colon or an em-dash (“–”). A comma is not strong enough, and makes it a run-on sentence. Likewise, I would change the comma between “shine” and “the” to a period. With a comma, it’s a run-on sentence.
After, “The voice acting is hideous,” specially should be especially, or maybe ‘specially if you’re being cute.
In the last paragraph, “this is not” should probably be, “this is not it.”
And to clarify– the entire post was quite understandable. None of the issues prevented understanding of what you were writing– and really, that’s all that matters! :D
Thank you for your imput Trent.
Oh, and, er, you need a period after “eyes of horus” and in the last sentence, past should be pass.
Well, you asked, so I hope I’m not coming off as rude or anything. “to” should be “too” (they sound the same, but mean different things), “peble” should be “pebble”, “acces” should be “access” and “unexploted” should be “unexplored” (I guess you just hit the wrong key here :P). But those aren’t a big deal, because it’s possible to understand what you mean. However, the following part is a bit confusing: “that saying that can”. If you mean that the detective is saying that, a better way to put it would be: “who says that they can”.
PS: It’s PS, not PD. xD
Oh no, in fact i have to say thanks.